EOC week 9: Top Three Mission Statements

The top three best Mission statements are:



Kylie’s Vegan Bar

Marissa’s cultural restaurant/bar

Jose’s World Football House


I thought Kylie’s mission statement was very well written because she backed up her reason as to why people should eat there with facts about eating healthy, “Veganism keeps the body up to optimal health and to live longer. Following a vegan diet improves health such as clear skin, easier digestion, lower risks of diseases, and better weight management.” Not only was her statement educational but it was encouraging and motivating and made me want to eat at her restaurant. I also thought that her idea was great because we don’t have too many healthy restaurants in town and now that a lot of more people are getting into healthy lifestyles, it would be great to see more restaurants like that.

Marissa’s mission statement was one of my top picks because she was very descriptive with her statement and she made it very clear as to what kind of restaurant/bar she is running. She also listed reasons why her restaurant would be a better place to go compared to others. She was able to sell her restaurant without coming on too strong and pushy, for example when she stated, “Aren't you tired of the same boring restaurants? Dim lighting, popular songs playing in the background, no real entertainment? My restaurant/bar is a place where you can bring family and friends for a different type of dining experience.”

The third statement that I chose is Jose’s, because he was very organized and on point with what he had to say. He has all the right information, not too little, not too much and the fact that he has his statement organized/categorized makes it easy to read. I also like that he has a motto because all the good businesses out there have a motto and it helps distinguish his bar from others. Motto/Slogan:
"Breath life into streamed football."